胡天詠

聖公會
阮鄭夢芹小學上午校

冠軍


Today, my family and I went to Tai Po Waterfront Park and Hong Kong Railway Museum. First, Dad drove our car to the carpark near the Tai Po Waterfront Park. Then, we walked to the pool in the park. A boy was playing in with his toy ship there. After that my sister and I saw a playground, so we ran towards it and played on the slide. After playing on the slide, we went to a playground nearby and then played on a strange thing. It was like a half of an egg. We can make it move by moving a plate on the table in the middle of the thing.

When we had played enough, my sister got hungry, so we went to the tuck shop and bought a sandwich to eat. Lastly we went back to the carpark to get our car. Then Dad drove us to the Hong Kong Railway Museum. When we saw a old train, Dad said 』I think this train is used in the 1910s』. We all agree. I found that we can walk into the old train! My sister was so excited, she yelled 』Wow! Great! Yippee!』 My Dad scolded her, so I went to the back of the train alone and found a door. I climbed into the train. Mum followed me. Then dad and sister climbed in, too. I sat on the chairs. They creaked a bit. My sister said 『 Hey! Look, sister! The back of the chair can move back and front!』 We moved the chairs to the front, then to the back. It was so fun. Then it was time to go back home. Today was so great.

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蕭悅盈

孫方中小學上午校

亞軍


Today my family went on an outing to Tai Po. We went to Waterfront Park. It is big. I rode a bike with my sister. We felt excited. Mum and Dad had a picnic. Mum made some sandwiches and some cheese cake. They were yummy! We ate a lot. We were full. After that we flew a kite. We were happy. My sister ran and she fell down. She cried loudly and nosily. Mum and Dad were upset. I told my sister ‘I fell down when I was four years old but I didn’t cry. Now you are six years old. Why are you crying?’ My sister was angry to hear about that. She cried loudly and loudly. So dad told her a joke. Then she laughed. Mum and I were happy, too. We visited Hong Kong Railway Museum, too. I have been there four times. So I felt not sure but my sister has not been there before. She felt excited. Then I read a book when they were visited the museum. The book was about museum in Hong Kong. I read the pages about the Space Museum. I have not been to the Space Museum before. ‘Oh! We can watch sky show there. What a great place!’ I said. ‘My sister heard what I said. Then he asked ‘Can we go to the Space Museum tomorrow? I think it is interesting.’ Mum and dad were looking at her and smiled.

What a wonderful day! I hope we will have an outing every day.

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馬衍豐
大埔循道衛理小學

季軍


Today is a wonderful day!

When I woke up this morning, my parents were telling me that we would have a one-day tour. I was surprise about this. It was the first time that I went to a one-day tour. Mum suggested going to Snoopy World. Dad suggested going to Hong Kong Park. I suggested going to the WaterFront Park. At last, my presents all agreed of me, go to the Waterfront Park for the one-day tour.

After we arrived to WaterFront Park, we had a rap first and we walked to the Butterfly Garden. There were a lot of different butterflies, all of them were beautiful. We stayed there for twenty minutes, them we left. After that we went to the Garden. Inside there had many different kinds of insects, bees, bugs. It was interesting.

In the afternoon, we had a picnic on the green grass, it was comfortable, the fresh air was blowing to me and we started to have our lunch.

‘Yummy!’ I said when I finished my lunch.

At four o’clock, we went to the tower, I raced with my father that if who ran to the top of the tower, who win. At last, I won. We looked at the view and braving fresh air. Then, we went lack down.

We were tired when we went home. I took a bath and had my dinner.

Today is a wonderful day!

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